I love how you've captured so much of the world in these snapshots of lives and of small things and details. They feel at once like metaphors and literal statements...maybe they're both. I like that things can be both microcosm and macrocosm simultaneously.
Your eloquent but unpretentious language wraps simple concepts in beautiful clothes, instantly making them something more.
The idea that our world is being held up by someone stronger than us, someone of myth and legend, contrasts wonderfully with the little snippets of delicate life and the final question inspires so much thought and consideration.
I have no answer to the question but I really love the poem.
Your eloquent but unpretentious language wraps simple concepts in beautiful clothes, instantly making them something more.
The idea that our world is being held up by someone stronger than us, someone of myth and legend, contrasts wonderfully with the little snippets of delicate life and the final question inspires so much thought and consideration.
I have no answer to the question but I really love the poem.